Changes On Poem (please read)

Raven · 08-22-2001, 04:16 PM

Recently I wrote this poem and had posted the url for it. Hobbiton has been having problems and it is not able to be seen. I have put it on another site and would like for you all to visit it so you can also see the changes I made to it. Please let me know if you like the changes made.

Do let the page load completely with the music so you can enjoy it better.

The link for it is:

http://leonorc.home.mindspring.com/poems/SleepWalk.htm

Raven (Lenore)

rdf · 08-30-2001, 06:04 PM

Raven, all I get is a picture of the ocean, and beach. Did you make a mistake in the link? I like your poems, you write very well, and your words bring out many emotions in me.

Raven · 08-30-2001, 07:33 PM

rdf,

I was wondering what browser you have. Have noticed that Netscape will not work very well with my poems at times. I have Nestcape 6 and IE and they both showed the text. I have a style sheet for this poem and think it is supposed to work with Netscape. Do you use any of these browsers? Also, did you get to hear the wav file on it?

I think that you will like the poem but if you continue to have any more problems let me know and I can probably email you the text of my poem.

Thanks for reading my poetry. Hope you let me know at any time that you have any problems with my work so I can fix it or work out something for it.

Raven

cheesecake · 09-11-2001, 04:47 AM

Raven---
I was able to access the poem as well as the music and really enjoyed it. For many it is a haunting dream. Please keep writing and posting your works.

08-22-2001, 04:16 PM	#1
Raven Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Earth Posts: 3,089	Changes On Poem (please read) Recently I wrote this poem and had posted the url for it. Hobbiton has been having problems and it is not able to be seen. I have put it on another site and would like for you all to visit it so you can also see the changes I made to it. Please let me know if you like the changes made. Do let the page load completely with the music so you can enjoy it better. The link for it is: http://leonorc.home.mindspring.com/poems/SleepWalk.htm Raven (Lenore)

08-30-2001, 07:33 PM	#3
Raven Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Earth Posts: 3,089	Browser rdf, I was wondering what browser you have. Have noticed that Netscape will not work very well with my poems at times. I have Nestcape 6 and IE and they both showed the text. I have a style sheet for this poem and think it is supposed to work with Netscape. Do you use any of these browsers? Also, did you get to hear the wav file on it? I think that you will like the poem but if you continue to have any more problems let me know and I can probably email you the text of my poem. Thanks for reading my poetry. Hope you let me know at any time that you have any problems with my work so I can fix it or work out something for it. Raven

09-11-2001, 04:47 AM	#4
cheesecake Moderator Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: USA Posts: 7,522	Sleep Walk Raven--- I was able to access the poem as well as the music and really enjoyed it. For many it is a haunting dream. Please keep writing and posting your works.

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08-30-2001, 06:04 PM	#2
rdf Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Someplace between Nowhere and Goodbye Posts: 12,610	Raven, all I get is a picture of the ocean, and beach. Did you make a mistake in the link? I like your poems, you write very well, and your words bring out many emotions in me.