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08-06-2001, 09:39 PM
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A Poem
That man
Who is that man Who seems so sad His eyes have a certain look A look that shows so much pain They hold a faraway look As if he is not here What has happened in his life What have his eyes seen Is that sadness also within Why does he grieve He once had a life He once had a love So precious and dear A love of his own He now sits alone No one to call his own The love he once had Has now gone Gone with the wind Into the unknown She was here one day Now he is so alone He asks himself Why did she have to go Why does he live so alone And feel so forlorn The tears cannot dry They run down his face He doesn't seem aware Of the people who stare He sits there so lonely He looks so forlorn Keeps on crying Lost in a world of his own. © 2001 Raven Lenore |
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08-07-2001, 12:29 AM
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Good poem Raven - did you write it yourself?
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08-07-2001, 07:12 AM
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Raven
Thank you so much for that lovely poem. I am so glad that you posted that. Wise.
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08-07-2001, 09:37 PM
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Thank you
Thank you Dr. Young and Shawn for reading my poem and giving me your opinion on it.
I will continue to post more later on as time permits and as often as I can write more of them. Yes, Shawn, I wrote that one and have more that you are welcome to read in my homepage anytime you wish.  Raven |
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08-08-2001, 02:38 PM
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WOW
Raven thats great....like all your poetry
 XOXOXOX ~*~*~Cilly~*~*~ |
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